These two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The two maps give information about road entrance to city hospital in different years
Overall , two roundabout were built in 2010 to. replace the 2007 bus stops , and a separate large bus station was built on the southwest side of the City Hospital and, the 2007 staff and public car park were split in 2010, and staff car park wasbuilt on the east side of the City
Hospital and public car park on the southeast side.
Turning to details , there was a bus stops on the west and east sides of Hospital Road on the south side of the City Hospital , but by 2010 they were demolished and a roudabout was built
on the noth and south sides of Hospital Road.
As far as , in 2007 on the east side of the Hospital Road , the staff and the publicicar park where located together . However, by 2010, the staff and public car park was divided into two, and a staff car park was built on the east of the City Hospital AT.
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- These two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 67
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation Discuss both views and give your own opinion 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y hospital in different years Overall , two roundabout were built in 2010 to. r...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t in 2010 to. replace the 2007 bus stops , and a separate large bus station was bu...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he southeast side. Turning to details , there was a bus stops on the west and e...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d on the south side of the City Hospital , but by 2010 they were demolished and a ...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uth sides of Hospital Road. As far as , in 2007 on the east side of the Hospita...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...07 on the east side of the Hospital Road , the staff and the publicicar park where...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e publicicar park where located together . However, by 2010, the staff and public ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36257309942 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13344129782 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415204678363 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1785240704 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.2 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283294895346 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190251849541 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663765875909 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179293525309 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673292814354 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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