Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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... opinion on how to iron out the problem.Some people think that,that poverty is good ...
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...n out the problem.Some people think that,that poverty is good even if it is dissatisf...
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...y is good even if it is dissatisfactory.Others say it is the most optimal option that ...
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...ptimal option that ameliorate situation.In my opinion,despite the fact,many people...
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...situation.In my opinion,despite the fact,many people accept the lack of money,I consi...
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...act,many people accept the lack of money,I consider it is better to correct this c...
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... 2 hours a day and gets paid accordingly,he does not want to go to extra work,even,...
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...gly,he does not want to go to extra work,even,think about it,but, he is healthy and u...
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... to go to extra work,even,think about it,but, he is healthy and uneducated.He does n...
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...ut it,but, he is healthy and uneducated.He does not try to improve his life. Howe...
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...es not try to improve his life. However,other people oppose it and they risk to arriv...
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...However,other people oppose it and they risk to arrive at anything,moreover, they do not blame...
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...e it and they risk to arrive at anything,moreover, they do not blame their parents for th...
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...their parents for their miserable lives.But strive for their future.They realized t...
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...rable lives.But strive for their future.They realized that they could to achieve an...
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...They realized that they could to achieve anything through patience and hard work....
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...cs also spent 5years of my life doing it,my father was against it also thought it w...
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...t it also thought it was useless for me.Importantly, I won the International Olympiaf and e...
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...tantly my father proud of me. To sum up,while it is convinient for persons to stay in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25868725869 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52192975612 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.248395142 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 340.5 106.682146367 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.25 7.06120827912 528% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911345769521 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534278045122 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043357315391 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534278045122 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043357315391 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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