The three diagram below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea.
Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons
The growth and forecast at the coastal area of Brightsea can be seen in the maps.<br><br>Present day, Fisherman cottage built in 1950 is converted into Cafe at north-east area. The new road is constructed running through it from this area to south east to link the aforementioned building and Hotel. In the middle of 1990s, Lighthouse keeper’s house was established there but was demolished now. Ferry Wharf is located in the centre of the map modernised from Jetty in the previous years.<br><br>Looking the expansion planning, Restaurant and Flats are predicted to build at the tip right corner of the map. Another improvement can be looked at south side of previous location which are Supermarket and Parking Area will be constructed. Then, the extension of Hotel will be projected in the same location beforehand, and new amenities such as Sailing club and Telecommunications Antenna are likely to be erected as well. Ferry Wharf will be moved to this location in the future.<br><br>Overall, changes on public facilities and accomodation is improved now. However, many new buildings will be added in this site planned in the following years.<br><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...coastal area of Brightsea can be seen in the maps.
Present day, Fisherman ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... club and Telecommunications Antenna are likely to be erected as well. Ferry Whar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19251336898 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56233228799 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3986040362 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0188515585255 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00871287835876 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0154331117145 0.0843802449381 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0188515585255 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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