The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate the variation in the yearly expenditure of a UK school over a period of 30 years( from 1981 to 2001).
Overall, it can be seen that the teachers' salaries have been the largest user of the school income over three decades.
The teachers ' salaries and resources increased in expenditure by 10% and 5% respectively over a decade between 1981 to 1991. In contrast, the furniture and equipment and other workers salaries reduced their spending by 10% and 5% respectively over the same period.
However, from 1991 to 2001, the teachers ' salaries and resources witnessed a decline in the amount of money spent on them.This led them to close the period with 45% and 9% respectively. The insurance had the least proportion of expenditure throughout the 30 years whereas the other workers' salaries experienced a steady drop during the same period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79736584094 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3309522595 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121446262062 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663991358602 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653609175972 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873333479007 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686709723221 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.