The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981 ,1991 and 2001
The given circular charts reveal compare the total expenditure five different amount of a uk school.it shows the the change in annual spending by a particular UK school. The data was celebrated in shows the percentum which is ckearly and coherently represented.
It can be seen that the three circles and shows the annual spending time by a UK school. All circles was a different. I can be see the first circle. It shows the first circle in total school spending 1981 was insurance was tiny fraction was very lowest ,and teachers salaries was a one fourth very highest , and a other workers salary was a low. It was a resourses and furniture and equipment less than fifth. Moreover insurance and other worker salaries is lower is the 1991 year with teachers.
As for as trend is concerned the total school spending in 1991 was insurance is 3% and teachers salries is a 10% is upper salary. Total teacher salary was a 50%. Here government is a toxic for the teachers salaries . Government is a all things to the toxic.it is a some people do not recieve the full payment of the banks.
Overall, it is evident that furniture and equipment withessed a sharp fall of 10% in the first ten years and then surged to under a quarter in 20%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'amount' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'amounts'.
Suggestion: amounts
...re the total expenditure five different amount of a uk school.it shows the the change ...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...al expenditure five different amount of a uk school.it shows the the change in an...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ifferent amount of a uk school.it shows the the change in annual spending by a particul...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ifferent amount of a uk school.it shows the the change in annual spending by a particul...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...ending time by a UK school. All circles was a different. I can be see the first ci...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ng time by a UK school. All circles was a different. I can be see the first circle. It sho...
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Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...urance was tiny fraction was very lowest ,and teachers salaries was a one fourth v...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s salaries was a one fourth very highest , and a other workers salary was a low. I...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ies was a one fourth very highest , and a other workers salary was a low. It was ...
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Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...a one fourth very highest , and a other workers salary was a low. It was a resourses an...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...urniture and equipment less than fifth. Moreover insurance and other worker salaries is ...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ent is a toxic for the teachers salaries . Government is a all things to the toxic...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r the teachers salaries . Government is a all things to the toxic.it is a some pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57918552036 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56023574193 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1014031771 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8461538462 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233794362426 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772762625847 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124458277724 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138232136869 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129043681067 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.