the three Pie Charts below shows the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001
The given pie charts reveals the changes in yearly expenditure by particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. The chart shows how the expenditures proportion changes with changing needs.
As it can be clearly observed from the chart that, the teacher salaries occupies the major portion, that is, 40% in 1981, which shows a slight increase in the year of 1991; whereas the proportion declines by 5% in the year of 2001. Also, the insurance sector occupies only 2% of total spendings, there is only one 1% rise in 10 years; from 1981 to 1991, that shooted up to 8% in 2001.
Moving further, other workers salaries have major portion of 28% in year of 1981, that drops below the quarters in 1991, and decreases to 15% by the year of 2001. Moreover, the expenditure on the other resources such as books was only 15% in 1981, that raise by 5% only in 1991, where it shows a drastic decline in the year of 2001 to 9 % only. Also, spending on furniture and other equipments was about 15% in 1981 and decline by 10% in 1991. Expenditure on furniture and their equipments Shoots up in year of 2001.
Overall, the spendings on teacher salaries and furniture equipments increase in given years; whereas the salaries of other workers decline to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65765765766 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47518196698 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490990990991 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6633108486 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.888888889 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332480671184 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15921521735 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130931028247 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213591431843 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159247080552 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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