The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts show the changes in yearly spending of a UK school in the years of 1981,1991, and 2001 spanning three decades.

In 1981, teachers' salaries encompassed most of the expenditure which was 40% and the second-highest was the other salaries contributing 28%. Resources and furniture and equipment shared the same amount(15%) while insurance is responsible for the lowest amount of costing merely taking 2% of the total amount.

Teachers' salaries saw an increase of 10% in 1991 as well as resources such as books for which the increase was 5%. The school spent a smaller amount of money on furniture equipment and other salaries than in the previous decade which is 6% and 10% less respectively but insurance expenses rose up to 3%.

After 10 years, in 2001, the budget for teachers' salaries declined 5% but was still higher than it was in 1991. Furniture and equipment costs hiked up to 23% from 5% and so did insurance costings. Expenses on insurance climed up to 9% as both spending on workers' salaries and books fell down drastically.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the previous decade which is 6% and 10% less respectively but insurance expenses...
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... equipment costs hiked up to 23% from 5% and so did insurance costings. Expenses ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, still, well, while, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93888888889 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73689920968 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5782757604 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.125 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138269923824 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700759178946 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125983916085 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125047489696 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159506752213 0.0819641961636 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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