Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowdays, we can appear a dip influence of commercial advertising instead of focusing real need in daily life.But what is the most effective method for dealing with the problem.For many people famous consumer goods illustrate advertising equally with precise demand .I completely agree with the opinion of question statement that consumer commodities reflect the power of inaccrate and brodcasting commercials altercation of the actual needs of the society.I will support my view with examples.
Firstly, familar commercial products allways emphesise their upgraded things in their advertisement .I often have this opinion because plainliness people allaways encouraged to buy improved marchendise rather than previous one. But interesting point is that those people can comfortably make consumption or do their work without having the latest one.for example .I can use my current key bord for all of my typing.I do not need any upgraded key board to do my work .But key board company is continiously forcing to purchase a new one through advertising.If i do this it will be entirely dissipate of my money then make me dullard.
One the other hand, if someone can not understand which marchendise or product he need for his require work as a resuly advertising power will obviously helpfull for this person.Take oldest people as an example.They can not adapt with the modern varitie of product and overcome this confusion with the help of regular advertisement.
Another reason why i agree with the view is that people have to utilize their whole earning.people especially personnels, lower class and middle income wage commited that theit expenditure might not be out of their bound.But advertisement power enforce them to by exorbitant things and eventully shove people economically danger condition.We can use industry labour life as an instance.At the edge of the month they can not manage money in proper way becaue they spent too much because of the brainwash of advertisement power.
In conclusion allthough it is a common belief that advertisement sometimes help people.I believe, extra advertisemnt and their businees outlook to the candor people is merely a problem for our society.
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but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 5.60731707317 731% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 965.302439024 193% => OK
No of words: 346.0 196.424390244 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37572254335 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99602128492 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 106.607317073 198% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609826589595 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 283.868780488 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
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Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
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Chars per sentence: 310.0 112.824112599 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
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Language errors: 30.0 1.69756097561 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762208464442 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524904525594 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087281124793 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507208600764 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.2329268293 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 61.2550243902 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.06136585366 139% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 40.7170731707 255% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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