Topic: The diagram below shows the process of collecting rain water for use as drinking water in an Australian town.
The picture illustrates the procedure of converting rain water into usable household water in a city located in Australia. In overall, there are five main steps, in which water undergoes two different processes: physical and chemical.
In the first step, rain water is collected from the roof in a rainy day before being drained into a tank filled with pebbles to experience the first physical treatment. Those small stones will act as an absorbance factor, thus eliminating a huge amount of dust in raw water. After some times of being filtered, preliminary water is transferred into a reservoir in the third step to prepare for the second treatment, the chemical one.
In the fourth stage, water is treated with some dedicated chemical substances to complete its treatment process. The water is then ready to put into use through a system of separate water pipes that supply drinking water to each household in town.
- Topic The charts show information about the reading habits of UK teenagers Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features Make comparisons where relevant 93
- Topic The diagram below shows the process of collecting rain water for use as drinking water in an Australian town 61
- Topic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, third, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03267973856 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64574323799 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7344923598 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328638437726 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142668371569 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715614416736 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218180911082 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555810229218 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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