Topic: The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The three pie charts give information about the average spending on daily necessities, the demographic and the level of resources exploitation worldwide.
In overall, money allocated for food and other stuff is highest compared to transport and housing. Furthermore, although Asia has the highest population figure, yet USA and Europe are reported to outnumber other continents in terms of resources consumption.
In the first pie chart, ordinary folks are likely to spend more money on Others and Food Category, with 40% and 24% expenditure recorded respectively. While Transport and Housing observe less than 20% of spending worldwide.
As can be seen from the second and the third pie chart, Africa has the lowest figure for population density (10%), only one-sixth compared to Asia, which is the most crowded continent with more than a half (57%) of people residing in. Meanwhile, although accounting merely 14% each, Europe and America lead the world in terms of resources consumption, with 60% of materials used for both continents.
- Topic The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 84
- Topic The charts show information about the reading habits of UK teenagers Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features Make comparisons where relevant 93
- Topic The diagram below shows the process of collecting rain water for use as drinking water in an Australian town 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8412802202 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8549651062 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183759161253 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080305033798 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474815343188 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112946712131 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436938616276 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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