The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
As can be seen the line graph displays the trend regarding the correlation between age and the amount of criminality in the UK at 20002, while illustrating the proportion of different offence in the UK are showed as the pie chart.
It can be seen there is a noticeable high point peaked on the trend of the offences at the adolescence period among the age ranks in 2002. Besides, it could be classified all the inmates into 4 types by different convictions.
In 2002, the criminality began showing up at the age of 8 and headed through an upward trend immediately to 70% at the age of 16. The conviction rate climbed to a record high of 80% at the age of 20; thereafter, the rate turned down remarkably. Remaining a steady decline from the age of 28 to the age of 60 and finally the percentages of inmates are lower than 10%.
The pie chart provided the proportions and the categories of different reasons why the prisoners are in the jail in the UK at 2002. The categories divided into 4 types, included violent crimes, property crime, drug crime and public order crime. It is obvious that the highest type was up to 40%, the prisoners of this type are committed of violent offenders. The percentage of the second and the third are convicted of property and drug criminalities at 23% and 22% respectively. The final one was conviction for public order crime at 9%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, regarding, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58943089431 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77407678625 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0941041811 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.636363636 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197482376625 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756294096976 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437028133905 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118638469359 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029043691229 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.