The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate some changes to the two-third area of the island.
it is cleat that the principal difference to the island is the facilities of accommodation. there ate two areas of accommodation. one is in the west near the beach, there has six accommodations; the other one is in the central, it includes nine accommodations.
Looking at the second map of island, we can see that the restaurant locate in north and a block of reception is between two areas of accommodation. The reception is surrounded by a vehicle track, this track also goes down to the pier where people can sailing in the south sea of th island.
Furthermore, tourist can swim near the beach in the west. A footpath connects the western accommodation units also leads to the beach. And Both of maps, we can find that the east part has no change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...to the two-third area of the island. it is cleat that the principal difference ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...and is the facilities of accommodation. there ate two areas of accommodation. one is ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
.... there ate two areas of accommodation. one is in the west near the beach, there ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7397260274 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00396935127 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3574657453 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8888888889 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108377568462 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460777690822 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412850765434 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711452950471 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428026812283 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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