The maps illustrate how an island changed after some developments.
Overall, the island has been sinificant development in term of some tourist facilities such as: restaurant, reception area, accommodation and so on for vistors travelling in here.
Looking at firt the island before, the island did not have any facilities. There was only trees and beach on the island. Moreover, most of the places were empty. After that, many tourist facilities have been constructed including accommodation, restaurant, entertainmain centre, pier for boat, swimming facility on the beach and so on. In addtion, the trees and plants in here remain unchanged to creat a fresh air for travellers.
Besides, foothpaths and vehicle tracks have been built to move conveniently. The foothpaths were made to walk beetween the residing places and the beach while the roads for vehicle such as mortorbike were erected to visit the restaurant, receptioin area and peir for boating.
- The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided Into three categories from 1995 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 10
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35761589404 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96641434261 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7523448297 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148209282287 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643364643152 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073109589265 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112226748323 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793427658301 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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