The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps elucidate the information about some tourist facilities on the island before and after the construction.
Overall, it is clear that dramatic changes were observed in the overall period. Island had developed more accommodation facilities, whereas they had given less significance to trees in that area.
In detail, it is noticeable that a considerable number of changes were experienced in housing. A large number of houses were built around the reception which was located in the center of the island. To the north of it, a restaurant was built. Also, to the south of it, they developed a port Blair to attract the people for tourism. In the same way, we can see two sails that were placed at two ends of the pier.
In contrast, the Island had not given any priority to planting a greater number of trees. Trees remained unchanged before and after the construction. Similarly, to the northeast of the island, there is no change seen in the beach area. Equally, to the northeast of the island, there was an open space which has not changed from the past.
- The graph below gives information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 73
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 78
- The chart below shows what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 78
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world 61
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishments should parents and 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...of changes were experienced in housing. A large number of houses were built around the reception ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, whereas, in contrast, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79459459459 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68988311025 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4871233272 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239636378511 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836068119273 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133110924594 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186307172389 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188494389904 0.0819641961636 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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