The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.
The two maps illustrate the changes of a whole island, before and after the renovation by some building survices.
In general terms, there have been a significant changes in the construction of an island which can atract more tourist in the future.
It is clear from the first map shows that before the construction, there are many trees on the West and the East of the island. Besides, there is a smal beach on the West.
However, the island is altogether changes after the renovation. The trees on the East are still remain for natural view. On the other hand, the trees on the West are covered surroundings by six accommodation and it is linked each other by footpath. In addition, the footpath is linked to the beach on the West of the island where they built a swimming zone for tourists. In the central of the island, many accommodation was built and it is also linked by footpath. In the middle of the central and the West is reception and restaurant where is linked by vehicle track and heading to the pier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...al terms, there have been a significant changes in the construction of an island which ...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...vation. The trees on the East are still remain for natural view. On the other hand, th...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun accommodation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many accommodations'.
Suggestion: many accommodations
...tourists. In the central of the island, many accommodation was built and it is also linked by foot...
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Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uilt and it is also linked by footpath. In the middle of the central and the West ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, still, in addition, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56830601093 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59625531687 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486338797814 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3853361878 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256763951898 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094494967073 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109015440602 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183752235478 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983183954935 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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