The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
There are two different maps show the transform of an island between before and after some tourist facilities appear. The island has simple scenery such as: beach, sand and some plants before traveling services and facilities are built and developed.
After traveling developes, the island has an modern image. The beautiful resort is built on the island. A pier is built for boat come, it leads directly to the reception house. This house is surrounded by the vehicle track. On both sides of the reception are two system of accommodation for tourist in holiday.
Each system is organised in the ovan shape and connect together by footpath. A high class restaurant is built behind the reception house. It connects to the reception house by a vehicle track.
Most scenery is the same as before.
The island is became a professional resort.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-04 | minhthanh211 | 56 | view |
| 2018-01-08 | HANGUYEN93 | 56 | view |
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I confuse about this:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Can you explain this for me?
Maybe there is an extra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ter traveling developes, the island has an modern image. The beautiful resort is b...
^^
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le track. On both sides of the reception are two system of accommodation for tour...
^^
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...s the same as before. The island is became a professional resort.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60678580377 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9635786616 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.75 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191421610895 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650245701826 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977097595504 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886338798645 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101299788266 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.65 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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