The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the same island. The first one is before and the second one is after the development for tourist facilities.
Looking at first, there is a huge island with a beach in the west. The island has approximately 250 meters width.
After the construction, two area of accommodation is built. one area is in west next to the beach while other area is in center of island. There is a restaurant between these accomodations an the north and there is a reception block in front of it which is sourrounded by a vehicle track that it connects reception to pier.
Overall, the island had mainly changes after this development. Not only there are lots of changes on island, but also there are same changes in sea to provide some activities to tourists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...on, two area of accommodation is built. one area is in west next to the beach while...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... restaurant between these accomodations an the north and there is a reception bloc...
^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
... restaurant between these accomodations an the north and there is a reception block in...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 624.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62222222222 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74460188482 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.520110294 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217667598164 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937605966041 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712390715039 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127983720615 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809235884945 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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