Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Today, almost all of the big cities in the word become more international than the past. Every year many people immigrate to different countries while they should learn about the language of the destination country. Living in a foreign land with a different language can make some serious problems likewise practical problems.
There are many new situations after immigration for a person which are unimaginable. Many people learn about the new language before the immigration but it is not enough. Still, there are some situations that people can not understand some phrases and it makes a misunderstanding. Misunderstanding in informal or semi-formal places such as university or shopping malls is not problematic and these misunderstandings usually make funny memorize while in formal situations it is different. For example, a misunderstanding about bank account can make serious problems.
Although, today there are many powerful online translators which can help to avoid many problems about understanding a foreign language. These translators can help both of people in a conversation to understand each other well. Furthermore, many people try to speak slowly and simply when they speak with a foreign person. However, people can not use a translator in many places or all of the people are not very friendly to confront foreign people. So these can make some serious social problems.
To sum up, misunderstanding in formal and serious situations can be very problematic but it is not very important in informal situations whereas it can make some good memorise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
Today, almost all of the big cities in the word become more inte...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k account can make serious problems. Although, today there are many powerful online t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, so, still, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37096774194 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19538070602 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.862262856 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17288417824 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752925875226 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802471374117 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114073341352 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551944638309 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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