The given map provided the information about an island what totally changed from past to present and construction of some tourist facilities.
Before, an island had remained trees that place and also had o beach. But after construction of island the face of island totally changed for tourist facilities. And, added more creative construction before that place has not entered point but after the development it built a pier which place all tourist get in the island. Furthermore, they dramatically build a reception which quit far from beach. Along with, around the reception has a vehicle track and straight way has established a restaurant and it is near by sea. Moreover, it also renovated the accommodation the left side of and right side of the reception. Additionally, that accommodation has constructed like a circle and their has a many footpath to go another space and all of oath added with reception. Also, accommodation of left side has modernised circle and the middle point have tree which was remain there before. On the other hand, reception of island has expended their footpath in west side which direct to go for beach area which has relocated a swimming area. Besides, an island trees remain in east side.
To sum up, this island fully modernised from before to present and there has changed most of the important part of tourist area. There has constructed many accommodation which had not been there before and also reconstructed beach area and modified some entering point and for eating there has also built a restaurant and other side their has not changed trees zone that trees still remain that place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties. Before, an island had remained trees that place and also had o beach. B...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey dramatically build a reception which quit far from beach. Along with, around ...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... has established a restaurant and it is near by sea. Moreover, it also renovated the ac...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ght side of the reception. Additionally, that accommodation has constructed like ...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun footpath seems to be countable; consider using: 'many footpaths'.
Suggestion: many footpaths
...nstructed like a circle and their has a many footpath to go another space and all of oath add...
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Line 3, column 870, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...nd the middle point have tree which was remain there before. On the other hand, recept...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rees remain in east side. To sum up, this island fully modernised from befor...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...To sum up, this island fully modernised from before to present and there has cha...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun accommodation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many accommodations'.
Suggestion: many accommodations
... of tourist area. There has constructed many accommodation which had not been there before and als...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which had not been there before and also reconstructed beach area and modified so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99267399267 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71721799365 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6546987429 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130168521678 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575027794574 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603080598314 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119355884123 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473690503832 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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