It is true that, living another country we have to talk in an international language because it creats a social issue and also it effect Daily life problems. I agree with this statement because if we can not do this another country it creats a major problem in our practical life.
On the one hand, we can not communicate with others and English is a second global language. In addition, if we can not speck to another country in international language where we are living than we can not share our any kind of emotions and also problems then it can be effect our life and creat a social problem. For instance, turkish peopliving in a Australia there they havevto talj in English if they speak there turkish language then australian people can not understand their needs. Moreover, the most important think is our books and journals are published in english such as text books, magazines, global news etc.
Perhaps, major job problem it creats a social and practical life issue like as, if we move another country and staying there we have to need a job to maintain our daily life, so this place we Don't talk to an international language then we can not servive there and we can not get a better job. Furthermore, international business meetings are regularly held in a english that means we have to speak foreginer language . Another one is, we can know others culture easily and communicate normally nad share our emotions and also we can make neighbour and friends.
To conclude, that it is better concept to us living a good life that's why foreigner language make out us our major problems like social and practical life to living other country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71724137931 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59481348119 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475862068966 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3534100124 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245981019806 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117701792397 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883371052333 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183322366907 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538929250351 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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