The given map provides information about the two way to get a city hospital show two different year (2007 to 2010). In general, the area witnessed dramatically changed.
In 2007 tge city hospital had two road but there had a just bus stop and some space used staff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very specific area. There two road main point become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospital road to constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of hospital road to built a individual staff car park area. In additional, to extended a public Car parking area which are developed of city hospital right side. However the city hospital surrounding by Ring road and it has still remain there same placeand the city road also remain it’s previous place.
In contrast, the bus stop which demolished in 2007 this place used for one side of hospital road to bus stop and staff car park .
To sum up, 2007 to 2010 year the hospital road and city road has got two roundabout which linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area are divided and reconstructed different place. Moreover, the bus stop has disappeard to hospital road Both side from 2007 to 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...city hospital had two road but there had a just bus stop and some space used staf...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...used staff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very s...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very specific ...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...anged very specific area. There two road main point become two traffic circle. F...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'circle' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'circles'.
Suggestion: circles
...two road main point become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospit...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospital road to constr...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'joints'?
Suggestion: joints
...al road to constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'roundabout' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'roundabouts'.
Suggestion: roundabouts
... constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of hospital road t...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he Right side of hospital road to built a individual staff car park area. In addi...
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...dual staff car park area. In additional, to extended a public Car parking area wh...
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Suggestion: However,
... developed of city hospital right side. However the city hospital surrounding by Ring r...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...rrounding by Ring road and it has still remain there same placeand the city road also ...
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...place. In contrast, the bus stop which demolished in 2007 this place used for o...
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Suggestion: .
...ital road to bus stop and staff car park . To sum up, 2007 to 2010 year the hosp...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... two roundabout which linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area ...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hich linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area are divided and ...
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Suggestion:
...lic, staff car parking area are divided and reconstructed different place. Moreo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reconstructed different place. Moreover, the bus stop has disappeard to hospital ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, in addition, in contrast, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43210991871 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47465437788 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.89722892 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284414004587 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133547952345 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760401681465 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200013723947 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741667655106 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...city hospital had two road but there had a just bus stop and some space used staf...
^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...used staff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very s...
^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very specific ...
^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anged very specific area. There two road main point become two traffic circle. F...
^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'circle' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'circles'.
Suggestion: circles
...two road main point become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospit...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospital road to constr...
^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'joints'?
Suggestion: joints
...al road to constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'roundabout' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'roundabouts'.
Suggestion: roundabouts
... constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of hospital road t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he Right side of hospital road to built a individual staff car park area. In addi...
^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dual staff car park area. In additional, to extended a public Car parking area wh...
^^
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... developed of city hospital right side. However the city hospital surrounding by Ring r...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...rrounding by Ring road and it has still remain there same placeand the city road also ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...place. In contrast, the bus stop which demolished in 2007 this place used for o...
^^
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ital road to bus stop and staff car park . To sum up, 2007 to 2010 year the hosp...
^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... two roundabout which linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area ...
^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area are divided and ...
^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lic, staff car parking area are divided and reconstructed different place. Moreo...
^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reconstructed different place. Moreover, the bus stop has disappeard to hospital ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, in addition, in contrast, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43210991871 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47465437788 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.89722892 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284414004587 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133547952345 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760401681465 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200013723947 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741667655106 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.