the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...city hospital had two road but there had a just bus stop and some space used staf...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...used staff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very s...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ff and public car parking area. In 2010, City hospital has changed very specific ...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anged very specific area. There two road main point become two traffic circle. F...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'circle' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'circles'.
Suggestion: circles
...two road main point become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospit...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...become two traffic circle. Furthermore, the left side of hospital road to constr...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'joints'?
Suggestion: joints
...al road to constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'roundabout' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'roundabouts'.
Suggestion: roundabouts
... constructed a bus station it joint two roundabout. Then the Right side of hospital road t...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he Right side of hospital road to built a individual staff car park area. In addi...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dual staff car park area. In additional, to extended a public Car parking area wh...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... developed of city hospital right side. However the city hospital surrounding by Ring r...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...rrounding by Ring road and it has still remain there same placeand the city road also ...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...place. In contrast, the bus stop which demolished in 2007 this place used for o...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ital road to bus stop and staff car park . To sum up, 2007 to 2010 year the hosp...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... two roundabout which linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area ...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich linked bus station and the public, staff car parking area are divided and ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lic, staff car parking area are divided and reconstructed different place. Moreo...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reconstructed different place. Moreover, the bus stop has disappeard to hospital ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, in addition, in contrast, in general, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70967741935 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43210991871 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47465437788 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.89722892 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284414004587 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133547952345 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760401681465 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200013723947 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741667655106 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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