Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (451467)
It is true that, some people argue that today we have too many options while, i accept that this many suit many people and i believe that it is beneficial all kind of people in the world.
On the one hand, it can be useful for our anykind of people. We can choose our favourite food which one we can eat anytime such as i always try to take my favourite delicious food and also outside food pizza, pasta,burger and so on. Moreover, we can shopping easily and buying our dress anywhere and wear like, nowadays people what they want to wear and also they can buy from online or shopping mall. Furthermore, we can use technology our daily life and everywhere for instance, watching movie and using smart phone and also use electronic food maker machine which work immediately. Apart from this, we students can choose our educational course which we want to take and continue.
On the other hand, if we can choose own choice than it will have negative affect which we have to controlled our any kind of choice. Additionally, we use much more technology if we use this everyday then one day it will be vanished our natural life and people can attacked many issues. Besides, we can not maintain our health diet then we can infected many disease like diabetes, heart attack, food poison. Along with, people spending their time in home then they missed their outdoor activities and they get early bored.FOR example, nowadays people are doing like seating in a sofa then watching movies ir scrolling phone. In additional, student uses their lab technology instrument that's why they can not experiment their orginal or natural experiment such as students use technology that's why they can not learn practical it affected their experiment in lab.
To conclude, people believe that nowadays we get msny kind of opportunities which effected our life and we can make our own decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t today we have too many options while, i accept that this many suit many people ...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun suit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many suits'.
Suggestion: many suits
... many options while, i accept that this many suit many people and i believe that it is be...
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Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ept that this many suit many people and i believe that it is beneficial all kind ...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people in the world. On the one hand, it can be useful for our anykind of peop...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , burger
... food and also outside food pizza, pasta,burger and so on. Moreover, we can shopping ea...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...asta,burger and so on. Moreover, we can shopping easily and buying our dress anywhere an...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...buying our dress anywhere and wear like, nowadays people what they want to wear a...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
... On the other hand, if we can choose own choice than it will have negative affec...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogy if we use this everyday then one day it will be vanished our natural life and...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'infect'
Suggestion: infect
...ot maintain our health diet then we can infected many disease like diabetes, heart attac...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., heart attack, food poison. Along with, people spending their time in home then ...
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Line 5, column 688, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...nt uses their lab technology instrument thats why they can not experiment their orgin...
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Line 5, column 790, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...eriment such as students use technology thats why they can not learn practical it aff...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir experiment in lab. To conclude, people believe that nowadays we get msny...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78461538462 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47654273238 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529230769231 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4841347774 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208851241153 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094884751938 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824787990866 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171999778908 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884584585455 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.