Two maps illustrate the way to access to a city hospital in both 2007 and 2010.
In 2007 and 2010 respectively, there were a lot of changes around the area of hospital and also the road access to it. The most significant changes was the appearance of public car park and the bus station.
By 2007, there was only a small road beside the car park for staff and public called Hospital road. Also some bus stops took the position on both right and left sight of the Hospital Road
After 3 years, on the right sight of city hospital, the public car park was built and created a new entrance to the hospital. A roundabout was placed next to Hospital Road and leaded to the bus station, which was built to replace some bus stops. The car park was for staff and public changed into staff car park only. To connect the Hospital Road and City Road, a roundabout was taken place and leaded to the bus station
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 67
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... staff and public called Hospital road. Also some bus stops took the position on bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37278106509 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1751820538 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6642048443 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296971343795 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174597439626 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167810647675 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262815914824 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164355398554 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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