As a matter of fact, highschool programmes contain some obligatory subjects such as Math, English and Literature, what if unpaid community services make mandatory part of the programmes ? Personally, I believe that there are some certain benefits from this subject as students can gain more experiences from particular activities and learn to be better person.
According to many people, there are a handful of advantages that community services bring to young generation. By taking part in some projects or an organize event such as charity , pupils can be provided life skills like interpersonal skill , encourage them to exchange thoughts with other participants that has the same interest. Besides, it is indirectly helping students to develop strengths and consolidate their ability of extending relationships by making new friends. All of these elements play an important role in a human’s life, especially in studies.
On the other hand, knowledge can affect attitude and lead to behaviour subsequently of a student . The pupil’s morality will be improved significantly. They can learn how to empathise with those who has unfortunate situation like the homeless or orphan. Community services raise awareness by showing the young generation can contribute to the country and make it better day by day. In short, it’s a great opportunity to fulfill a duty as a student in highschool.
On the whole, unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of highschool programmes due to its advantages . Students can reap the benefits of attending in such meaningful events or activity nowadays. It’s a good way to improve themselves and to be a better person in life.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 67
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, in short, such as, as a matter of fact, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05891846367 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0748244136 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151100229191 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505822202288 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541395666145 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100103670929 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408036224147 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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