The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.The online sales of four sectors are considered such as Electronics & appliance, food & Beverage, Home Furnishings and Video Games.
The majority of the purchase was contributed by Electronics & Appliance in both the times, but there was a slight decline of five per cent in 2010 to 30% which was seen with 35% in 2005.Another bulk share was given by Home Furnishings in 2005 which had a huge fall of ten percent from 25% to 15% in 2010.
When compared to 2005 Food & Beverages had a great surge of ten percent from 22% to 32% in 2010.In 2005 the least partner was the Video Games, but in 2010 it out shined the Home Furnishings with a good surge to 23%.Home Furnishings tends to places itself in the bottom in this period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ten percent from 25% to 15% in 2010. When compared to 2005 Food & Beverages had a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65753424658 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59657894589 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.7104959841 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 226.666666667 112.824112599 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 22.9334400587 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190837275099 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154347665956 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132731789843 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154347665956 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132731789843 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.2329268293 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.14 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.