the two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sector in Canada in 2005 and 2010
The two pie charts illustrate the comparison of different kinds of online sales for retail sector in canada in 2005 and 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that the highest percentage was electronics and appliance while the most negative was home furnishings.
In the one hand in 2005, the electronics and appliance got 35% which the highest category, followed by home furnishings (25%), then percentage food and beverage which was 22%. Meanwile at last video games fell down at 18%. it is clear that the higher noted electronics and appliance 35% in 2005 and beside one of the smallest home furnishings with 15% in 2010.
From 2005 to 2010 online sales for retail sector in canada from four category (electronics and appliance, food and beverage, home furnishings, video games) in general movement was fluctuated. On the other 2010, food and beverage increased dramatically also home furnishings dropped rapidly counted 10%. However electronics and appliance reduce marked 5%. In contrast video games rose the amount of 5 % too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20958083832 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74448013325 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9676438518 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258997617445 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1144467623 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195030320927 0.0843802449381 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215048406935 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241181755346 0.0819641961636 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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