The provided two pie charts give an insight about the industry sectors which have contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
First of all,the agriculture sector had the highest contribution with 24% in 2000 but it showed the downfall of 10% in 2016,Whereas the construction section illustrated very less percentage with 3% in 2000 as compare with 10% in 2016.However,the divergent sectors such as government as well as leisure and hospitality contributed approximate constantly for the Turkey economy in both the years.
In the further scrutinizing,the health care and education zone gave contribution similarly by 17% in 2000 and 2016.In addition,the economy of turkey escalated to 12% in 2016 from 8% in 2000.However, in the contribution of trade ,utilities and transportation ,the proportion took a quantum jump of 2% in 2016.
Overall,it indicates that the agriculture had an immensely role for boosting the economy of Turkey in 2000,Whereas the healthcare and education sectors became very noteworthy in 2016.
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? 56
- Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants.Why do you think people waste food?What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? 56
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 84
- With the increase in use of the internet books will soon become unnecessary To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 43
- today the media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful do you think this true Are young people today worse than their parents or does evry new generation get criticized by older people 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, similarly, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41614906832 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39288521386 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.826752379 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.0 112.824112599 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.25 5.23603664747 444% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303097960746 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202242761018 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788707406943 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202242761018 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788707406943 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.2329268293 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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