Migration in the developed countries is believed to have immense significance for the professionals; thus, an increasing number of white-collar people seem to be leaving their poorer nations in order to work in developed countries, and further, the causes along with solutions are yet to be analyzed in the subsequent paragraphs.
The reasons for this issue need to be considered that seem to be responsible for the deterioration of skilled people in poorer countries and increase in rich countries, the first and foremost is better living standard along with high wages, which is not possible in the low-quality nations, whereby they rather turn to abroad for spending their life in a professional way than home country. To cite an example, according to the survey of European Union, more than 10,000 Italian doctors and 8,000 nurses left Italy to work abroad between 2005 and 2015.
The implementation of some appropriate ways may have a fruitful outcome to overcome this situation. Firstly, the rate of wages should be high for professionals owing to have a good quality of education. Secondly, the government has to live up to their responsibility in terms of providing daily basic facilities free of cost such as health, transportation, reduction of taxes on their income as these facilities are a must for the long term survival in the country. As an illustration, the Bahamas country located to the north of Cuba had set a rule in 1991 in order to receive no tax from the employees, thereby living in the country, and meanwhile, they developed their nation in every field.
In conclusion, the migration of professionals in developed countries cannot be said positive for the country. Therefore, the contribution of government is immensely significant to control the management in an appropriate way for the welfare of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a professional way" with adverb for "professional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... turn to abroad for spending their life in a professional way than home country. To cite an example, ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y significant to control the management in an appropriate way for the welfare of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09134095319 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8982198089 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.444444444 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201371503735 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076240676025 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720737860816 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132020755036 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803373253319 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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