Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities, while others believe a bicycle is a better way
Nowadays, is believed that several people think that a car is the best way to travel in the town. While another believe a bicycle is a better way. I completaly agree that more advantages than disadvantages for reason made bicycle as the best way to arround cities such as be able saving time.
In the one hand the disadvantages of used car to travel in the town is prolong travel time on street. It is because there was some a bottleneck in conurbations. For example in big town like Jakarta which well-known with congestion cause a car difficult moved on the crossroads or main roads of the capital at the time after work even in the weekend. As result almost people alive in the capital city spend for long time on street each day approximately quarter from twenty four hours. It is important succeed considered when elected a car to travel cities.
• On other hand, the advantages of many people who chosen bicycle as the best way transportation was able speed up travel time in the inner city. It is due to by riding a bicycle almost all people not impacted from congestion on the road when travel anytime. For instance in developing countries such as Singapore, almost people in the middle of city prefer used bicycle to travel cause made people was more faster reached destination and moved from one located to another. Therefore people be able used the time which spent on the road if their elected to travel by car for doing other activity excessively in a day. It is no doubt that valuable and useful for having a lot of time, not spending time tk travel on the road. I do nit believed that a car was the best transportation to around in the town. In my opinion travel by bycyle had more benefit than drop back. Which be able influenced lost of activities that people did in one day cause save time. In conclusion from where I stand I trusted with that statement which declared bicycle is better transportation to around in the town rather than car cause some people did not used much time to experience congestion on the rod
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is the best way to travel in the town. While another believe a bicycle is a better w...
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Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ay to travel in the town. While another believe a bicycle is a better way. I completaly...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prolonged'.
Suggestion: prolonged
...es of used car to travel in the town is prolong travel time on street. It is because th...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...eet each day approximately quarter from twenty four hours. It is important succeed consider...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...he advantages of many people who chosen bicycle as the best way transportation was able...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y riding a bicycle almost all people not impacted from congestion on the road whe...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
...bicycle to travel cause made people was more faster reached destination and moved from one ...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... and moved from one located to another. Therefore people be able used the time which spen...
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Line 5, column 871, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bycyle had more benefit than drop back. Which be able influenced lost of activities t...
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Line 5, column 1134, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ther than car cause some people did not used much time to experience congestion on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56675749319 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58111363836 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468664850136 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5187337849 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380869823424 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14576423693 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132522181326 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305885328666 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153409218469 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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