Uk graduates and postgraduates students who did not go to full-time work after leaving college in 2008.

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Uk graduates and postgraduates students who did not go to full-time work after leaving college in 2008.

The bar charts demonstrate the number in the UK of graduate and postgraduate students who are not full-time employees in different destinations in 2008. There are significantly more graduates than post graduates in all destinations, however, both graduates and postgraduates show that the highest number of students choose to continue studying.

graduates doing part-time job, 17,735, are considerably less than those in further study, 29,665, whereas the number of postgraduates in part-time work, being 2,535, is not far from the 2,725 who chose further study. Voluntary work is the lowest destination in numbers for both graduates and postgraduates at 3,500 and 345 respectively. Unemployment is rather high, falling just below part-time work for graduates at 16,235 and relatively less for post-graduates at 1,625.

All in all, the stats for bothe are quite similar when ignoring the total number of each group, although there are little difference in how many doing part-time jobs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Graduates
...tudents choose to continue studying. graduates doing part-time job, 17,735, are consid...
^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'whereas']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218934911243 0.268076937826 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.12426035503 0.116061578633 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10650887574 0.0759168565197 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0769230769231 0.0366838410393 210% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.153846153846 0.155750635184 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0355029585799 0.0379272487307 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08000853283 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00591715976331 0.0210936926555 28% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.094674556213 0.0948980150116 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0236686390533 0.00967000014798 245% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 990.0 1161.00487805 85% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.51315789474 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401315789474 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302631578947 0.247514529752 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243421052632 0.171178102325 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.197368421053 0.112407865282 176% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08000853283 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 54.9916435015 49.3433353143 111% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 25.3333333333 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7689724519 42.9750493124 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 135.714022679 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 55.5964912281 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.02941176471 2.94281807926 69% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311099489793 0.418131533498 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.180625079121 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0737759645256 0.0850326197045 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.728043092108 0.706616315825 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136867093425 0.157042692854 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17458360845 0.228904883108 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684747821178 0.108899403657 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276150168333 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0612056866192 0.0812612215331 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208766731673 0.316326947829 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108962301752 0.0921553760075 118% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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