Write about what you did during the winter vacation.
my winter vacation started off on a rather negative note. Not even 3 days after our half yearlys ended that my parents told me that they want me to study for cadet exams. they signed me up for it already so there wasn’t much room for protest. but all my plans for the holidays did take a pretty devastating turn for that. I had all sorts of productive activities planned which I’d do after exams. I did some brain workout with apps like Lumosity, Figment which basically use a selection of games which work the brain and enhance our cognitive abilities. I had tried to learn a new language in the past but of course, I wasn’t able to keep the practice consistent. so I embarked once again on learning French on Duolingo. Also started playing some puzzles like sudoku or word search as I heard they’re effective in increasing language skills and spatial skillsl. Honestly, i’m just trying to be smarter because it’s recently come to my attention how dumb i’m becoming. i’m attracted to any sort of productive activity out there and so I always incorporate them within my routine whenever I know of them. but these last few weeks have consisted of nothing but timeless travelling and incessant studying for cadet. Nonetheless, this vacation has made me realise a lot of things and so while it wouldn’t exactly be fit to say that I had a pretty great winter vacation, it definitely was a meaningful one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, nonetheless, so, while, of course, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72289156627 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5993586161 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670682730924 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6858076816 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4615384615 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0667059901324 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239761792173 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426498219814 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667059901324 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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