Dear Noor Alani,
Hi Nora, how are you? I hope you will be fine when you will see my letter. I send this massage to you for invite you to see movie "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" it is represented by your favorite celebrity who is "Johnny Depp".
Firstly, I think it is interesting film because my neighbors advise me to see it and she said that it is very enjoy and it quality good and also I think it also very interesting because his movie very nice also, his films are very successful and their stories are great. So, I think that I should to see it with you.
In addition, my family will not be in the home they will go to the grand parent's house and I asked my neighbor to take the DVD and the CD from it so that we can see and İ will make like a cinema in my house, and I will bring the popcorn and pepsi and some sweets to have fun while we see the movie.
Finally, I well be happy if you can come and see the film together.I hope that you will accept my proposal, and we will meet soon.
With lots of loves,
Mariam Ahmed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: MASSAGE_MESSAGE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'message'?
Suggestion: message
...hen you will see my letter. I send this massage to you for invite you to see movie &apo...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... you can come and see the film together.I hope that you will accept my proposal, ...
^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. With lots of loves, Mariam Ahmed.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11538461538 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34039330635 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.729526456 43.030603864 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158266140025 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736630665335 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417177065467 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964448064867 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387621767654 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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