Write a letter to the planning department. In your letter –
Say why are you writing
Give reasons for you objections
Explain what you think would be a better alternative
Respected sir,
My name is name is David john. I am living in Chandigarh from last couple of decades. I am writing this letter in connection with planning which your organisation had prepared for the welfare of my city. Please, allow me to elaborate more.
Firstly, yesterday, I read in the newspaper that the department have planned to make our local airport to bigger aerodrome. It will be create enormous grievances for common person that’s why i do not want the implementation of such planning in my hometown. For instance, the pollution such as air pollution and sound pollution will be enhanced to great extent which pose a malignant threat to people’s health. Additionally, if the new international flights will be started here than it is apparently the people of my city will face another problem that is traffic congestion.
Laconically, it seems to me that it would be better choice if the planning department could construct a new international airport which should be far away from this city. Besides it, there is no need to spend massive amount of wealth just due to the development for older airport.
Given the situation, I would greatly appreciate if u could pay attention on this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
David john
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-05 | sandeep pooni | 80 | view |
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution To what extend do you agree or disagree What other measure do you think might be effective 69
- Today more people are travelling than ever before Why is this case What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler 72
- You had an appointment to meet you friend but you were not able to make it and you could not inform him Write a letter Apologize for not coming Explain the reason why you could not be there Tell him how you tried contacting Request another meeting 79
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective? 80
- Some young people commit crime while some do not? What are the causes and solutions to them? 80
My name is name is David john
My name is David john
in connection with planning
in connection with the planning
the department have planned to
the department has planned to
It will be create enormous grievances
It will create enormous grievances
It will be creating enormous grievances
it would be better choice
it would be a better choice
Sentence: I am writing this letter in connection with planning which your organisation had prepared for the welfare of my city.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 208 200
No. of Characters: 1000 1000
No. of Different Words: 135 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.798 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.808 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.884 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.301 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.657 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.032 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4