Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Today public health is the debatable question among the people. Frequently it is considered that the extension of number of sport facilities is the most effective option of developing public health. However, others, argue that this kind of improvements are not sufficient, other solutions are needed. The essay will discuss both views and prove that sport centres are not the only option; also other actions should be reviewed.
The increasing of sport facilities help the people become fit and healthy. There are a lot of factors in favour of this argument, such as reachable and available sport complexes, health clubs and communities in the vicinity areas (parks, in front of apartments and etc.). For instance, according to the survey which has been carried out among the people, proved that this type of increasing attempted the people to involve the sport activities.
On the other hand, some individuals think that improvement of public health does not depend on only growth of sport amenities, also another solution should be considered. In some societies lack of awareness related with health issues is widespread problem. Some research outputs prove that the people should be aware about the consequences of unhealthy lifestyle and the understanding of cause of problem is equal to solve this problem. Accordingly preparing the advertisement/social messages, providing the free awareness seminars in the health communities might be beneficial for people.
Finally, in spite of the increasing the sports facilities might impact on health issues of public, thanks to awareness training it could be gotten more benefits for rising the public health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ity areas parks, in front of apartments and etc.. For instance, according to the survey ...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...as parks, in front of apartments and etc.. For instance, according to the survey w...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...problem is equal to solve this problem. Accordingly preparing the advertisement/social mess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, however, if, so, for instance, kind of, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86453523808 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6604473282 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338168861685 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126333300691 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059456264281 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212171768397 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643510103162 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.