Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
The table below explicate information percentage approximately of carbohydrate, protein and three different diets a report for a university lecturer depict the information shown below. Overall as can been seen that 3 graphics difference about carbohydrate, fat and protein. The carbohydrate in health diet for sport and health diet get equal. The fat at average diet and health diet get same percentage. meanwhile about protein in every chart not significant because had difference percent every chart.
In average diet carbohydrate only stood at 40% marked at increase to 10% in every other chart .
The fat in the average diet and health diet marked at 20% and decrease drastically 5% in health diet for sport. Beside that the protein in Average diet counted Ar 40% and went down until 5% every chart . The protein unsure percentage obviously
Conclusion it can been seen that the charts marked at difference percentage
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- The word question 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...the information shown below. Overall as can been seen that 3 graphics difference about c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sport and health diet get equal. The fat at average diet and health diet get same...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...et and health diet get same percentage. meanwhile about protein in every chart not signif...
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Suggestion: meanwhile,
...et and health diet get same percentage. meanwhile about protein in every chart not signif...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... at increase to 10% in every other chart . The fat in the average diet and health...
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Suggestion: .
...r 40% and went down until 5% every chart . The protein unsure percentage obviously...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The protein unsure percentage obviously Conclusion it can been seen that the cha...
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Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...re percentage obviously Conclusion it can been seen that the charts marked at differen...
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...e charts marked at difference percentage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87586895081 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7412082742 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958558761997 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481708316009 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111996533525 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447787845078 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661139555918 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.