Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below
The given bar chart depicts the information about the university lecturer used to mode of transport by during the year 1960 from 2000.The mode of try namely as car, train, and bus, tube. The data was calibrated in per centum.
Overall, it is evident that, the car was utilised minimum in the year 1960. Whereas the maximum used to car from the2000, while otherhand, In the administration department the bus was higher consumption by the year 1960, whereas the bus was used to atleast in 2000year.
As obviously seen from that, as far as consider the train was used 20 per centum and car was being consumed a tiny per centum by the year 1960.other hand, the train were utilised in the university one third and twenty- one per centum respectively. Moreover, the car had been used in the university about 40 percent age from 2000year.
In addition to this, the transport mode of tube were consumed in university 30,20,25 respectively by during the year 1960 to 2000. Further,more, In the year 1960 had consumed the mode of transport to peak forty per centum. Further moving, the bus were utilised 15,26, per centage in the 1980and2000 year.
- In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring to what extent do you agree 63
- Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe that bicycle is the better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams e.g football. However, some people think that it is more beneficial to play individual sports e.g tennis and swimming. Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind , such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. 73
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...sport by during the year 1960 from 2000.The mode of try namely as car, train, and b...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry namely as car, train, and bus, tube. The data was calibrated in per centum. ...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , more
...by during the year 1960 to 2000. Further,more, In the year 1960 had consumed the mode...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... of transport to peak forty per centum. Further moving, the bus were utilised 15,26, pe...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centage in the 1980and2000 year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88324873096 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66752114253 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482233502538 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9913574501 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.888888889 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0574977240482 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274748160243 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386859534397 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444508987746 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406727919826 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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