Some people think that art subject is important for children in schools while, other believe that it is waste of time. Discuss both side views and give your opinion.
With rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that; 'whether art subject in school curriculum is important or it is just wastage of time'? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that; art is the ,"part and parcel" for life. Therefore, this subject is essential for children in school curriculum. They strengthen their view point by claiming that with the knowledge of art and craft pupils will be able express their view points in an effective way as well as get a high profile job in different sectors to achieve success in life. A good illustration of this is 'Intelligence bureeo' and defense department where many brilliant officers draw the sketches of criminals to find them. Hence, army as well as C.I.D would be the perfect epitome.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people, who reckon that art subject is not as much important as other subjects. To make their view point convincing they claim that in this modern era, mathematics, science these subjects are in high demand. Thus, children prefer to adopt such subjects for carrier growth.
To make it crown, weighing both the options; I believe that there is no single conclusion, still, I make this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Nodoubt, in present scenerio, other subjects such as: mathematics and science were in more demand but, art is also important in field of defense to catch the criminals through their sketches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94136807818 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72942012425 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4422221713 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25989045776 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078166241179 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685768701059 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147095022271 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198555524466 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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