Writing Task 1
The line graph compares the consumption of fish and some different meat in European country between 1979 and 2004, a period of 25 years. The mass of meat and fish was measured in grams per person per week. Overall, the consumption of fish and meat dropped over the period shown, whereas the amount of chicken that were eaten increased, and become the most preferred meat.
In 1979, 220 grams of beef was eaten by European people, and this amount decreased to 140 grams in 1981. However, the preference of beef reached a peak of 240 grams in 1982 before going down to 110 grams in 2004. The figure for lamb were lower, at about 150 grams in 1979 and went down to 60 grams in 2004.
In sharp contrast to this, chicken consumption was increased gradually, until it overtook the consumption of lamb and beef, at 145 grams in 1980 and 200 grams in 1990 respectively. By 2002, chicken consumption hit a peak of 250 grams and reduced to 240 grams in 2004. Fish consumption was 60 grams in 1979, and dipped to 30 grams in 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook the consumption of lamb and beef, at 145 grams in 1980 and 200 grams in 1990 ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239234449761 0.268076937826 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.114832535885 0.116061578633 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0334928229665 0.0759168565197 44% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0287081339713 0.0366838410393 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00478468899522 0.0131127313244 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.177033492823 0.155750635184 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0334928229665 0.0379272487307 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38775892043 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287081339713 0.0210936926555 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765550239234 0.0948980150116 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00478468899522 0.00967000014798 49% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1024.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47593582888 5.90752243213 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.235294117647 0.337110787985 70% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171122994652 0.247514529752 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.117647058824 0.171178102325 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0748663101604 0.112407865282 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38775892043 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.546246751206 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.7365073373 49.3433353143 85% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7777777778 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9642456875 42.9750493124 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.689975730869 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 37.890077243 47.7609492067 79% => OK
Elegance: 3.03225806452 2.94281807926 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.418131533498 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.231234364838 0.181151798455 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0467029072706 0.0850326197045 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.750449558252 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0584826753902 0.157042692854 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.228904883108 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.108899403657 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472302216361 0.367819155151 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.153347275021 0.0812612215331 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.316326947829 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0921553760075 0% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.