Writing task 1 practice
While the table demonstrates the sources of money, the charts demonstrate how it was allocated for three purposes: salaries, technology, and buildings and transport.
Overall, the police budget considerably increased from 2017 to 2018, and the national government remained the main source. In this period, there were also changes in the way money was distributed.
According to the table, the police had a total of 304.7m eu for spending in 2017, more than half of which came from National Governments (175.5m eu). The second highest funding was from local taxes, accounting for 91,2m, which was twice as much as that of other sources. After 1 year, while there was no change in contribution rankings, the police budget witnessed a climb to 318.6m, with a significant incline of 11.1m in the figure for local taxes.
Turning to the pie charts, it is clear that the majority of the police budget was spent on officers and staff salaries in both 2 years. Accounting for 75% in 2017, the figure for salaries slightly decreased to 69%. Much fewer, the amount of money used for technology accounted for 8% in 2017. This percentage almost doubled in the next year. Meanwhile, there was no change in the proportion of money allocated for buildings and transport, which stayed at 17% throughout the period.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2024-03-04 | phuong cao | 11 | view |
| 2024-01-04 | AhaanIshaan | 11 | view |
| 2023-12-01 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 73 | view |
| 2023-11-16 | phamquanghmu | 11 | view |
| 2023-11-01 | mary.ssherr | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02764976959 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67580477504 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1208916951 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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