WRITING TASK 1 Yau should spend abcut 20 minutes on th s task The charts below shaw the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the samc arcas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at bar charts provided reveals that the rate of universals` oil resources where located in several part of the world and also the percentages of oil consumption in one-year period in the same parts. Overall , in half of these sections the resources percentages are more than consumption rate so they can provide their oil demands by local resources. On the whole Middle East is on top of list of ares where have oil resources and Asia , with negligible difference , is number-one oil consumer among these areas.
It's clear that is a far difference between oil resources in different parts. As I said the most oil resources are located in Middle East at approximately 56 per cent . Following this , is the Canada at just under 14 per cent. The third most resources rate is Central and South America with about 8 percent of world's oil resources and in the bottom of the list is the area of Australia and New Zealand with just under 1 percent.
Let's go to other side and look at world's oil consumer. As you can see two most oil consumer areas is Asia and US , respectively with about 26 and 25 per cent . However third oil consumer is Western Europe with just on out of every ten , other oil consumptions' rates are not as many as these regions and are just under 10 percent .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'several parts'.
Suggestion: several parts
...ls' oil resources where located in several part of the world and also the percentages o...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e-year period in the same parts. Overall , in half of these sections the resources...
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Line 1, column 449, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f ares where have oil resources and Asia , with negligible difference , is number-...
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Line 1, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es and Asia , with negligible difference , is number-one oil consumer among these ...
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Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tween oil resources in different parts. As I said the most oil resources are locat...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...Middle East at approximately 56 per cent . Following this , is the Canada at just ...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...proximately 56 per cent . Following this , is the Canada at just under 14 per cent...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...New Zealand with just under 1 percent. Lets go to other side and look at worlds oil...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o most oil consumer areas is Asia and US , respectively with about 26 and 25 per c...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...spectively with about 26 and 25 per cent . However third oil consumer is Western E...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ern Europe with just on out of every ten , other oil consumptions rates are not as...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...se regions and are just under 10 percent .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, third, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64029666348 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6421602744 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169406518311 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772985574758 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408363500276 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125086716322 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132026678481 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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