WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line-graph illustrates the rate of broadcast audiences per UK population (over 4 years-old) in 24 hours daily during October-December in 1992.
Overall, the collected data showed a bell-shape figure for both entertainment tools, of which, the number of people who enjoyed watching television dominated the number of people choosing to listen radio from 01p:m until 06a:m of the next day.
According to the line-graph, only 8 percentage of UK population listened to radio at 06 a:m then this rate increased gradually until it reached peak at about 25% at 9:00 at the morning before experiencing a continuous downward trend until the end of the day with the ending point at around under 5% of population.
By contrast, the number of TV audiences showed a fluctuated trend from 06a:m to 12a:m with the rate under 15%, then rose sharply until reaching almost 50% at around 9 p:m. However, it dramatically declined to 2% at around 3:00 at the morning of next day. Then, the rate remained unchanged until 06a:m when people are awake for new day.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | Bich Thuy Pham | 78 | view |
| 2019-11-27 | Hussey | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-11 | dhavaljo15 | 56 | view |
| 2019-09-09 | NPATEL123 | 84 | view |
| 2019-09-09 | NPATEL123 | 84 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84780413268 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9353256316 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991001194094 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520922168234 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172910706906 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637273962624 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00918420094459 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.