You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be
arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the
weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir,
I'm planning to stay at your hotel for a weekend with my family and wanted your help in confirming the accommodation.
I will be arriving on the morning of Feb 15, 2014 and will leave on Feb 16, 2014. My wife and my two sons will be accompanying me. My wife and I would like to have a sea-facing double-bed room for ourselves. Our sons can share a attached double-bed room. I would request you to let us know about the costs for the weekend stay and also about the options for breakfast.
Since, we are not familiar with the areas near your hotel, it would be very kind of you if you could provide some information about the places and activities which can be of interest to us. My sons, aged 10 and 15 years, like water sports. We also like to go for bush-walks and short trekking trips.
Thank you in advance for your help. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Musheer Ahmed Mubarki
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