You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Deepti,
How are you? It’s been really long since we have met. How are things going on at your end? I, myself have been very busy lately so could not write as often we used to earlier. There is good news that I wanted to tell you. I have decided to go for Master’s degree in Information Technology and I have been selected by University of North Australia under foreign scholarship program. The university is just in the outskirts of Melbourne so will be staying in your city for next two years. Doesn’t that sound great!
All the formalities regarding the scholarship and admission are completed and the term will start from 1st July. I will be coming to Melbourne on 20th June and will be staying in the accommodation provided by the university in their campus. To make ends meet, I will have to get a part-time job in nearby area. Will you help me finding a part-time job?
As you have been staying in Melbourne from last 3 years and have done part-time jobs yourself you can guide me. I will be looking out for odd jobs like a waiter, cashier or garden cleaner. You can refer me to your friends and old employers. It would be really helpful if you could do that for me.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Warm wishes,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to find' or 'find'.
Suggestion: to find; find
...me job in nearby area. Will you help me finding a part-time job? As you have been st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54585152838 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53917270548 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1478695378 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2352941176 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4705882353 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275029595412 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103709027661 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885690824373 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175363211787 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838106254535 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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