You are the member of an environmental protection society which is organizing a “clean -up” weekend
Write a letter to the headmaster of your local school. .in your letter
Ask for students’ help
Explain what activities will be involved
Explain how useful it will be for the community as a whole.
Dear Sir,
I m le tran, from External Department of environmentalist associate. we are going to held an event called "Clean-up" Weekend will locate at the main Beach of vung tau. To create a memorable days and spread to citizen to protect the environment, we are honor to give a invitation for you - headmaster of vt high school and your student.
Can you tell us the time that comfortable for your school to participate in this project? this project will last for 7 days, from 24th Monday to 30th Sunday.
I really appreciate vt high school could join this event. Everybody in vung tau be able to be aware of protecting the Earth from a little action everyday, especially their province's beautiful landscape. Every students that come to our event will have a certificate of environmentalist associate. this would be a huge opportunities for students who want to apply for a scholarship.
our Activities is first clean up the seashore,then let the locals try the green handmade product from volunteers of the project.
If you want further information, please contact me by replying this mail, or calling my phone. my phone number is 145121254.
Your Sincerely,
le tran.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...partment of environmentalist associate. we are going to held an event called &apos...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...ronmentalist associate. we are going to held an event called 'Clean-up' We...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t the environment, we are honor to give a invitation for you - headmaster of vt h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... school to participate in this project? this project will last for 7 days, from 24th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... event. Everybody in vung tau be able to be aware of protecting the Earth from a ...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...otecting the Earth from a little action everyday, especially their provinces beautiful l...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...tificate of environmentalist associate. this would be a huge opportunities for stude...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'opportunity'?
Suggestion: opportunity
...ntalist associate. this would be a huge opportunities for students who want to apply for a sc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
...who want to apply for a scholarship. our Activities is first clean up the seasho...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
...ctivities is first clean up the seashore,then let the locals try the green handmade p...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...eplying this mail, or calling my phone. my phone number is 145121254. Your Since...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0303030303 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21115357546 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676767676768 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5287327151 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27118016637 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797946270205 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066438832547 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124762578744 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883957081538 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.