You are relocating to a new city. write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
When and why are you relocating.
what kind of house do you want?
Dear Ms,
I am Le Tran. I had sent you a mail about I will move to a new house of Oregon. I wrote this letter to make sure you clearly know what I wanted for a new place that we expected a lot.
We're packing our stuffs in the old memorable house. We're looking for a house that is near to university of Alabama, is the reason for our relocation. I and my sister are going to study in that school. Hence, my new house would rather be near that university, for convenience. I and my family will be there at 8th Dec, which means next Sunday.
If you have any problems on arranging our house, please contact me. my phone number is 0983439338.
Your Sincerely,
Tran(Ms.)
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| 2019-12-07 | letrn | 56 | view |
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| 2019-07-15 | Saira Faiz | 61 | view |
| 2019-07-15 | Saira Faiz | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms, I am Le Tran. I had sent you a mail abou...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t I will move to a new house of Oregon. I wrote this letter to make sure you clea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 546.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.265625 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39820845812 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3171617226 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.6363636364 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6363636364 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271016212217 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812518715517 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896193394028 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175798369187 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964555085918 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.3 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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