You have been asked to write an article for your school /college magazine about a city which you have visited, explaining why it is different from your home town.
You may give the article a title if you wish.
Write around 350 words.
East or west home is the best
Last month, I called my uncle who lives in Sankt-Petersburg and he offered me to visit them. I consult my parents about it and we decided that I should go to Sankt-Petersburg, so I could see my uncle’s family and also broaden my horizons.
This was my first travel with plane and I saw airports of both cities, namely Baku and Sankt-Petersburg. Both of airports are very busy and I didn’t expect so many people there. Compared to Baku, Sank-Petersburg airport is overly huge and attractive and also there are more planes which go to most countries of the world directly than Baku airports. My uncle met me there and he made a promise that he would show me many interesting places in the city.
My uncle said that Saint Petersburg is home to more than two hundred museums, many of them hosted in historic buildings. Of course, we wouldn’t visit all of them, but we drop in Hermitage Museum which is the largest of the museum and has featuring interiors of the former imperial residence and a vast collection of art. Every year many tourists come there and they can find out a lot of absorbing information about Russian art. However, such museums aren’t organized well in my hometown. Apart from that, we went to the parks and one of them is called Summer Garden. It is the oldest one, dating back to the early 18th century and designed in the regular style. It is situated on the southern bank of the Neva and is famous for its cast iron railing and marble sculptures. Nevertheless, in our city parks don’t have a long history, so they were created some years ago, whereas they need to be developed as well.
I really like transport system of this city, so transports consist of buses, trams, trolleybuses and underground. All of them work punctually and drivers are very kind and careful and they don’t do other deeds behind helm such as talk on the phone, thus we need such transport system.
It was a great trip and I enjoy it. Also, I could learn some information about Russia and Russian language a little. However, I couldn’t adjust to the weather because it was chilly.
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- There are advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city 72
- Some people think that teachers are essential to the learning process Others argue that students at schools and universities learn far more from the Internet than from lessons with teachers 45
- Although most people are richer than in the past modern life seems very stressful and the number of people suffering from stress id at record levels What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how could stress be reduced 69
- It is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. 80
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No. of Words: 385 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes for IELTS task I.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 10
No. of Words: 385 200
No. of Characters: 1679 1000
No. of Different Words: 218 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.43 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.361 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.561 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.648 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.557 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4