You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend, in you letter
thank your friend for the holiday
explain that you left your wallet in theri house
give them instrucions of how how to send it back to you
Dear James,
I had a great time at your place. I thought that a holiday at your home woudl be a great idea and indedd it was. I would cherish the memories i made with you and your family. I really appreciate your wift;s hospitality. She took really good car of me.
One a side note, you know how clumsy I can be sometimes and this time it was no exception. While i was at your home, i forgot something which i should not have forgotten --my wallet. YOu always say that i never change and i am pretty sure i never prove myself otherwise. Anyways, i beleive i forot to pick it up fromt he sidetable in the guestroom while i was leaving your place.
Richard, my friend from highschiool will be visinting your area for some business work. I hanve given thim your address. Please give hime the wallet when he viits you place next week.Thanks again for having me for holidays.
Regards
Asad
- You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think ti needs some improvements.Write a letter to the college maganzing in your letter.Explain what you like about cafeteriasay what is wrong with itsuggest how i would be improved 73
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.Write a letter to your friend, in you letterthank your friend for the holidayexplain that you left your wallet in theri housegive them inst 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...dd it was. I would cherish the memories i made with you and your family. I really...
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Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mories i made with you and your family. I really appreciate your wift;s hospitali...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd this time it was no exception. While i was at your home, i forgot something wh...
^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...no exception. While i was at your home, i forgot something which i should not hav...
^
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... at your home, i forgot something which i should not have forgotten --my wallet. ...
^
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... YOu always say that i never change and i am pretty sure i never prove myself oth...
^
Line 4, column 355, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...omt he sidetable in the guestroom while i was leaving your place. Richard, my...
^
Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thanks
...allet when he viits you place next week.Thanks again for having me for holidays. Rega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 5.60731707317 749% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 9.0 33.7804878049 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39156626506 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39895977118 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692771084337 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5802988971 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.75 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361749609017 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109226131628 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697609914092 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243998819148 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361953503527 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.2329268293 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.