You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think ti needs some improvements.
Write a letter to the college maganzing in your letter.
Explain what you like about cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how i would be improved
Dear Editor,
Being a student I go to college cafeteria, where i regularly order my lunch. There are many things to like about our cafeteria like comfortable seating and delicious food.
However, I want to bring into your attention the problems that i have with this cafeteria, Although the cooking staff is doing a great job, the ones dealing with the customer i.e managers and waiters are not providing a good service. The front staff seems to be oblivious to providing good service like responding to queries, keeping the cafeteria clean and attending to complaints which has made my experience of lunchtime very poor despite delicious food.
I would suggest that feedback loop should be implemented in cafeteria, this can be done by placing suggestioon boxes in cafeteria as we well as asking random customers to fill out evaluation forms.
I hope you would write an articles to bring these issues to college administration's attention.
Yours sincerely
Asad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... delicious food. I would suggest that feedback loop should be implemented in c...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an article' or simply 'articles'?
Suggestion: an article; articles
...uation forms. I hope you would write an articles to bring these issues to college admini...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1835443038 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8019967358 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708860759494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3002154644 44.8134815571 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203789901425 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902586541146 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275195014901 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111503949604 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296347941397 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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