You have lost an item of value on a train.Write a letter to the railway company.In your letter.Describe the itemExplain where and when you left itSay what action you would like the company to take

Essay topics:

You have lost an item of value on a train.Write a letter to the railway company.In your letter.
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is chethan Goda. I travelled in Shatabi express on 25th of this Month from Mumbai to Delhi.I am writing this letter to inform about an lost item during the journey.

I lost the black colored laptop bag. It has a laptop from Lenova, charger and headphones from CICSO.In addition to, it also has few bank related documents.

I travelled in First class AC A1 with seat no 66. I kept the back below the seat, before going to sleep.
When I woke up in the morning, I could not find the my laptop back. I felt it must have been stolen and I have also give complaint to railway office in the train.

I would like you to look into the matter as soon as possible and help me to provide the lost back.

Hoping positive reply from you.
Yours faithfully,
Chethan Goda

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40939597315 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15146473466 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704697986577 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.806905366 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7272727273 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191085052081 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575000696127 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549522208851 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734681663571 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556318680634 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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