You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The information of tourists from various areas including Asia, Europe, US and others paying a visit to a specific holiday resort in Australia is shown clearly through the chart and table. Overall, Europe and Asia are of significant quantity of tourists staying at this resort.
Taking the chart into consideration, Asia and Europe dominates the first and the second rank in tourists to the holiday resort with the percentage of 37 and 35 respectively. However, Asian tourists tends to have less average length of stay than others, particularly Europeans and Americans. For the accommodation, although Asian and American tourists still put hotel in the priority, other tourists consider Camping or Caravan as a good choice. Last but not least, most tourists coming to this resorts aim to go sightseeing.
In conclusion, most tourists of this resort are from Asia and Europe. Unlike Europeans and Americans, Asian tourists choose a short 7-day trip with the most popular activity called sightseeing.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 489, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... but not least, most tourists coming to this resorts aim to go sightseeing. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, still, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83165580422 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2613620716 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17821544079 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848681954293 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415302379868 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128250785226 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481526565708 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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